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Confession of skin
passion of the night
evaporates upon
sun's caress

Outstretched palms
dangling dreams
before wanton
pursuer's eyes

Grasp the ladle
to convey
memories from
a regretful well

Drink thirstily
poisoned pleasures
sinister endings
to innocent evenings
©2008-2009 ~DatenshiUmbra
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Before I decided on the fourth stanza I was contemplating leaving it at three and moving the first to the last. The fourth stanza is probably my favorite now though.

I've noticed that I tend to write in a four stanza format. I don't ever start out with the length in mind, it just always ends up that way. haha
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Love the last two stanzas.

I didn't know "Cheap or Tawdry Romance" was a category, lol.

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